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Broken Dream
Contributed by
ivy
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Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 11:47:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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My dream is broken,
I stay awake at night.
I cry alone on my bed,
No one by my side.
My heart bleeds,
This pain kills me.
People will never understand what I feel,
They stare at me as if my feelings are a sin to keep.
They want me to bury them,
As if it was never there.
I am tired of all this,
Wishing all this was not there.
I know what I feel is right,
But don't know why I am giving up?
My feelings are for you,
Till the last minute I take this breath.
Copyright ©
ivy
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2005-09-08 23:47:14]
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Re: Broken Dream
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 11:52:51 PM AEST
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Ignore these awful people and if you feel sad were here for you here ypdc.Feel free to pm me anytime if you ever need to talk.
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Re: Broken Dream
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by Chubs on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 12:17:24 AM AEST
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| sad poem. you have to remember that there are millions of people out there so you'll never truly alone. you just got to find that person. i used to feel the same way untill i went to summer school(surprising? yes) |
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Re: Broken Dream
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by LilyFire on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 11:31:01 AM AEST
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| Everyone feels down, that's just how life happens. No one will truly understand how another person feels, so I can't say I know just how you feel, but I have an idea. Just try not to dwell over such pains, life will get better in time. |
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Re: Broken Dream
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by Damien on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 11:41:35 PM AEST
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| Truely good poem Ivy, but what is lost is lost and probably u've lost it coz there's something better waiting for u :"> I'm sure there is :"> |
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Re: Broken Dream
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by Loende on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 09:02:38 PM AEST
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You are absolutely entitled to your feelings, so don't ever let anyone else ever tell you so. The heart does not 'reason' it feels, and the minute we stop it from doing that, is the moment we start to die inside. This was a wonderful poem and I was glad to find it. Keep up the good work.
Be Well,
Loende |
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Re: Broken Dream
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by Voyager on
Thursday, 13th May 2010 @ 01:30:08 PM AEST
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| Very well written, your emotions really came through your words on this one....very expressive |
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