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Truth
Contributed by
brokenfire77
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Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 10:46:55 PM in AEST
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A falsehood devoted to life
After death,
One may visit this place but
Only through meth.
Lie upon lie and no true
Answer to give,
You’ve spared your lasts
Thoughts not knowing how to live.
You fight tooth and nail trying to
Seek the truth,
But all you’ve managed to do
Is lose your youth.
You search for the right answers
With no success,
You know nothing of the truth
You must confess.
Your search is petty and
Without all hope,
You are unwilling to give up
But must cope.
You wasted your life for
An answer not there,
You will search for this lost truth
And this you swear.
Till the ends of time you
Promise to yourself,
You seek the truth that will
Reveal by itself.
Copyright ©
brokenfire77
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2005-09-08 22:46:55]
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Re: Truth
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 11:35:55 PM AEST
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It was well written..
but I had a difficult time with the capitolazation
of the first word in every line..
(though usually I will bear it..though outdated and frowned upon)
This time, the composition did not agree with said style-
All in all, it was a good write.
Sincerely Yours-
Billy |
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Re: Truth
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 11:55:14 PM AEST
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I thought it was very well written .
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Re: Truth
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by Chubs on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 12:25:37 AM AEST
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| good poem. took me a little bit to find the flow but i got it |
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