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Magical Hat Act Three
Contributed by
MadCackle
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Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 10:15:55 PM in AEST
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third verse, is exspectedly worse
it will cause you to scream, or blurt out a curse
right from the gate, I've made this too easy
it's not too abscene, or uncontrollably sleasy
It can make you freeze up, at the worst of times
its been known to send shivers, down the back of your spine
for some reason its known, to give people strength
tho its never been measured, by number or length
Its tough to ignore, in its most potent of form
much like the captain, thats navigating the storm
close you should be, to a revalation of thaught
if you were thinking its scare, scare it is not
once again it is time, to bring this poem to a close
you should by now know the answer, its on the tip of your nose
I whisper so softly, so that you lean into hear
with a sudden eruption, I say there is nothing to fear
Copyright ©
MadCackle
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2005-09-08 22:15:55]
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Re: Magical Hat Act Three
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by remote on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 06:33:41 AM AEST
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did you mean
it's not too obscene, or uncontrollably sleazy?
First of the series was quite interesting, second one mildly amusing, this one, you are now plain overdoing it.
You surely are quite creative in your approach though. |
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Re: Magical Hat Act Three
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 07:43:07 PM AEST
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lol, I love how you mess with words lol. So out of order, untidy, and I do know it is written this way on purpose, that is why it is so fun. I just get a kick out of your writes, so pleasant to read.
It takes a crazy mind like mine to understand fun writes. I find your writing style very relaxing, full of life, so much pleasure in reading.
It is so interesting how you can build on a word, describing it, yet the reader must read the entire piece in order to see what they have discovered. Its just pure wit, ( to know, to learn) what you can bring to a reader. Not an easy write.. Much thought must go into a write such as this.
I can't wait for more, but I suppose I must.
Thank you again,
Your reader,
Raquel Leah :D
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