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Its Cold
Contributed by
bubbletoes
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Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 07:44:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Gum Wrappers fly around inside my head,
My dreams at night, consist of chewing ciggarettes.
Cocaine igloo's that are blown away, by the winter wind
Snowshoe hares and polar bears
I'ts cold up here, inside my head.
The snowflakes freeze my feet
I try to sleep in my dream, but the snowflakes keep me awake.
they have no respect, or consideration for anyone they might be disturbing.
Frost forms on my ears and fingertips,..but not my thumbs,..
Smoking bubblegum and chewing up ciggarettes
I'ts Cold Up Here, Inside My Head.
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2005-09-08 19:44:31]
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Re: Its Cold
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 09:21:50 PM AEST
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| wild write its really good thought deffently abstract |
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Re: Its Cold
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by emystar on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 11:10:29 PM AEST
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Awesome.
I can actually understand it. U r a very creative thinker and writer.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Its Cold
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by sek-c-shaun on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 11:33:07 PM AEST
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| great write |
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Re: Its Cold
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by Elayner27 on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 09:35:58 PM AEST
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| I like that. It's very interesting and creative. It makes my head spin and think. I love the ... angle (I don't think that's the right word to describe but you might understand) of which it was written. Lovely write. |
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