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the toy
Contributed by
idiotbox
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Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 11:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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i was a toy before
nothing but plastic and elastic
to be pushed on the floor
now i see the truth
the lies in your eye's
the fakeness of your smile
there is no shame
to you i didn't even have a name
just a new toy
but the toy is broken
you have woken senses that shouldn't be
now i see your game
i'v been pushed too far
the toy is no more
i came alive
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2003-01-16 11:40:00]
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Re: the toy
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 02:07:55 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem...i am glad that you were able to "come alive" good job on this write and i wish you the best. |
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Re: the toy
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 04:44:09 PM AEST
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Lovely write...food for thought!!.. Good for you..
Jenni |
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Re: the toy
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by OreO on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 06:07:39 PM AEST
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Being used...oh how those words ring bells in my ears....very painful indeed.....this has inspiration ....toy no more you came alive.....how lovely....keep writing i enjoyed this one....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: the toy
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by JennyFruFru on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 12:44:34 PM AEST
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| My fav. :) Very symbolic . Love it! ~ FRU |
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