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Eviscerated
Contributed by
anitajames
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Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 04:03:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Eviscerated,
torn in half.
You stole me future,
erased my past.
With each breath I take
I'm forced to laugh.
Pretend I'm not broken,
pretend that I matter.
All the questions and pity
are too much to bear.
What gives them the right
to make me share?
Every day brings a shadow
that slowly encapsulates
the body that holds me.
A shadow of glass,
not strong enough
to block the blows
that come steady and strong.
They're trying to break me.
It may not be long.
Copyright ©
anitajames
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2005-09-08 16:03:26]
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Re: Eviscerated
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by WAE on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 04:38:00 PM AEST
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| Very good work, nonetheless I'd suggest spellcheck... |
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Re: Eviscerated
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 06:12:32 AM AEST
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A bad day indeed, I can tell. I hope you had a hug, they're so good when you need them.
Take care... *hug*
David |
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