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Tears
Contributed by
jaycee
on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 03:08:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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just driving to work
like any other day
tears roll down my cheek
why i can't say
life may not be great
that much i do know
but with no catalyst
why do these tears flow
moving on with life
i dismiss this event
but a couple days later
lacrimal glands will vent
to those that are sane
they don't understand
that losing control
wasn't what was planned
philosphically i wonder
what sanity must be
although i can say
it hasn't visited me
my blood is too sweet
it's something i ate
last year i was 90
but now 328
an emotional cripple
having lived too many years
the causes are many
for the river of tears
Copyright ©
jaycee
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2005-09-08 15:08:23]
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Re: Tears
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by WAE on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 03:17:43 PM AEST
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| I am sorry but I didn't understand what this poem is about. Some rhymes are visibly forced. |
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Re: Tears
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 11:34:40 PM AEST
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Jaycee
I am sorry to hear you have diabetes, a serious disease . The good news is its treatable. Hang in there, and take care of your self, (sugar free brownies)
Hugs
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Re: Tears
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 06:27:56 PM AEST
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(((hugs)))
Jenni |
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