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The shell of Grandeur
Contributed by
Roperclass
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Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 10:40:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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You wish that I would relax,
calm down and pretend like I’m merry.
It’s hard to act when I have no drive
no will when my world is imploding.
Crumble, piece by piece like ancient ruins in a hurricane.
Proud but not strong enough to withstand the onslaught.
Hit upon hit the walls are demolished,
turned into a fine dust.
A once powerful empire
reduced to a pile of rubble.
All that’s left of the metropolis are walls that display nonexistent grandeur.
Copyright ©
Roperclass
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2005-09-08 10:40:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The shell of Grandeur
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 11:36:10 AM AEST (User
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This is good and i understand your words very well. I hope the rest of your day goes better. |
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Re: The shell of Grandeur
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 01:03:43 PM AEST (User
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Archies right hope your day goes better.
well done on this write.
And by the way welcome to this site. |
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