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Alone Forever
Contributed by
Damien
on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 10:15:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Under the dark sky
I'm searching for my love
under the dark sky
I'm fading all apart
I feel the pain
inside of me like a cloud
no one can save me
the time will come for my death
I think of you and wish for my death.
I see you here with me
but I fear its just a mirage.
I look to the sky
the moonlight shines down on me
I feel so lost I fall on my face
I think about times that used to be
I can't find the right words to say
I don't know how to say goodbye.
There I was
life was bright
there was no sorrow
nothing could stop us.
Showed me hope
my dear sweet angel
saw my perfect soul.
Now I've lost my hope
my will to live.
My last farewell....
forever all alone.
Forever all alone...................
Copyright ©
Damien
... [
2005-09-08 10:15:13]
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Re: Alone Forever
(User Rating: 1 )
by kerrah681 on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 11:53:05 AM AEST
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| Ahhh, how sad, I feel bad for you, it sucks when you cant get over someone as quick as you got under them..lol, yah but love is stupid, its all about lust ,at first you feel invincible like nothing can stop you,than hello,where did he/she go, damn I shoulda spent more time with him'her, now I know what I had, too bad I had to lose it forever to find out, right...n-e-way, excellent little sad poem....Have a good one. |
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Re: Alone Forever
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by Ivy on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 12:39:14 PM AEST
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| brilliant write, i am with u in this and i understand what u r trying to say.... |
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