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Time heals
Contributed by
loopylou
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Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 05:16:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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time heals
but you're never gone
time hears
but you're always too close
to move away from
the pain in my face
the anger in my tears
it's been repressed for so many years
the weight of the situation
the wrinkles on my face
just waiting
for us to leave this place
time heals
does splits
and summersaults
but it can't make me forget you
so these problems are never resolved
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loopylou
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2005-09-08 05:16:12]
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Re: Time heals
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 08:07:04 AM AEST
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Very nice write, relatable, I liked it. Keep it up. Can't wait to see more.
- Cassy
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Re: Time heals
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 09:03:59 AM AEST
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Nice piece of poetry, I can sense the emotion of this one.
I especially like the last stanza, yes they say time "heals" but you like you said...sometimes time will never allow us to forget people.
I get that.
Good job. |
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Re: Time heals
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by anitajames on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 04:15:00 PM AEST
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| Reminds me of my own life. Good job. |
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Re: Time heals
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by JacobManning on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 12:43:31 AM AEST
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| "time heals all wounds" ha, yea right.... maybe one day I can believe that, but until then, the pain will always be there. Good share. |
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