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Dont even notice
Contributed by
black-bruised-n-broken
on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 05:01:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
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she's screaming
but the people around her
dont hear it
they look straight through her
as if she's not there
even her friends see straight through
they all think she's happy
they all cant tell her smile is fake
she smiles and laughs
as if she's fine and happy
but inside she's dying and sad
she bleeds and they dont even notice
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Re: Dont even notice
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 05:07:54 AM AEST
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| Wow...great write. Heartbreakingly painful, but great nonetheless. |
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Re: Dont even notice
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by emystar on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 05:53:39 AM AEST
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The only thing that sucks here is the feelings which u have captured well.
I can remeber 'bout 8 years ago I felt the same.
May god bless her abundantly.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Dont even notice
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 09:07:40 AM AEST
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sad situation.....but a common one at that.
I liked your conveyence of this private pain, expressed with deep sorrow.
I pray you were just writing.
Keep it up, this was a pleasure to read. ;) |
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Re: Dont even notice
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 06:04:21 AM AEST
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Blood from the heart is hard to see, but its stains are real enough. May your wounds heal. Well expressed poem.
Take care.
David |
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