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Life is a test
Contributed by
lp
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Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 02:02:06 AM in AEST
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Moment of clarity
by: >L.P<
clear as crystal
bright as day
my past few thoughts
came bright as day
life is a test
is what I realized
this conclusion
I will summarize
life is a test
life is a test
don't for get your #2 pencil
be on time and at your best
Isn't that what life is about?
showing up early?
and prepared as a scout?
Back to the thought
at which ima address
here's my realization
life is a test
The point im making is; life is like a test because you arent given the answers
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lp
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2005-09-08 02:02:06]
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Re: Life is a test
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 09:18:21 AM AEST
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Lovely concept for a poem... with some more work, I think it could be a beauty!!!
Welcome to YPDC...
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Re: Life is a test
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by remote on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 02:00:31 PM AEST
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life is a test because you arent given the answers
You could have included that too. Nice.
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Re: Life is a test
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by just-b on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 02:31:35 PM AEST
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| This is so tue no one is ever prepared for the unexpected or for the everday for that matter. |
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Re: Life is a test
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by WAE on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 03:29:52 PM AEST
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HEy, life is definitely a test. From your poem though I only assumed three things:
1. Have a spare pencil
2. Be first to be tested
3. Be prepared as a scout (which means what?)
I think there are more allusions one can find speculating on this topic...
Alex |
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