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Not Quite Indie Love
Contributed by
TeenageDirtbag
on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 12:21:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Ok so its 11 ***** o'clock
And your name is pulsing in my chest
Right below, where it's carved in my flesh
Isn't this just my luck?
My eyes are so heavy but they just won't close
Your image clouds them like it always does
Is it my fault,
the way you make me feel?
So lazy
My eyes are hazy
I'm just so...unartistic
But so realistic
And if I could...ground it in
With the sould of my heal
Just to tell you how I feel
Well if you just reciprocated it
I'm not sure I could take it
All i want to do is make it
But I'm so accustomed to the...painfullness?
Don't say you love me
Just let me be...so lazy
Okay I want you to say it
But maybe, just whisper it?
See, I'm not sure I can take it
So just whisper this...
All I want to do is make it...
Make it happen
And I'm all yours
Copyright ©
TeenageDirtbag
... [
2005-09-08 00:21:43]
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Re: Not Quite Indie Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 04:54:25 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this. Great write. I look forward to reading more from you. |
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Re: Not Quite Indie Love
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by WAE on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 03:42:12 PM AEST
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I like this... A lot of emotions...
Favourite part:
So lazy
My eyes are hazy
I'm just so...unartistic
But so realistic
Good luck!
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