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Intoxicated in Sensual Desire
Contributed by
pyrochick
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Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 11:39:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Lips on lips
Skin on skin
We become one once again
The sweet taste
Of sweat on your upper lip
It begins to drip
The feel
Of your touch everywhere
One glance from you makes me stare
My thoughts are never still
My body's under a trance
I'd live in this moment for eternity if I had the chance
My unresistant body
Tangled in sheets with you
Oblivious of what you're about to do
Your body
Knows all my soft spots, weak spots, sweet spots
The feeling of your touch is always in my thoughts
Night after Night, Day after Day
My heart gets an extra beat
When we're together between the sheets
You're my ecstasy
But only for a short time
But the memory of this is total sublime
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pyrochick
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2005-09-07 23:39:48] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Intoxicated in Sensual Desire
(User Rating: 1 ) by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 09:18:14 AM AEST (User
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wow....just your title claimed..this is a "sensual" write.
I like it and think you did a very good job.
You captured the many feelings of intimicacy exceptionally...and I can relate to certain thoughts :)
Well done, it's a first of this style for you...
Keep it up |
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