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The Choice
Contributed by
trixxx
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Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 07:09:27 PM in AEST
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Dissolve what trust you have in me
For I have lost control
Now just a slave to lying words
A shadow of a soul
Do not believe the things I say
Treachery is my game
I will betray you if I can
For truth is now my name
Keep wandering your blessed path
Choose blindness if you must
But stray your faith from anarchy
Make fast your heart to lust
Resist my superficial lure;
One warning will I give
Enjoy the fruit of life, devine
And maybe you will live
Copyright ©
trixxx
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2005-09-07 19:09:27]
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Re: The Choice
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by CuriousitysCat on
Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 11:35:40 PM AEST
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Hey, this was a pretty righteous poetic endeavor. Simplistic, but driven. I dig it, and i understand the feelings of being predatory even in the most superficial ways.
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Keep writing,
~Lucky Gemini |
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Re: The Choice
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by Paddy on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 01:06:14 PM AEST
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| well written poem. A touch icey, i like it |
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