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An Open Door
Contributed by
Archie
on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 06:34:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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There are so many things that i could say
I thought so hard about it
But if i said any one of them
the facts would still not change
A wedge is between us
no doubt about it
the only thing that remains
is what i'm gonna do
I think my actions prove
that I have been faithful
to what we could have been
Now I will step aside
go find that special goal
you could not fill with me
I'm not gonna try to hide it
I'm your friend as always will be
Yes my heart is hurt
but i mean for you no ill
Yes I have changed a lot
and there is more that I'll be doing
but it doesn't change the fact
what's in my heart was very real
Less and less we talk
that's always a bad sign
When I want to talk to you
you do not have the time
Some how my changes hurt you
there is no need to lie
instead of living a broken life
I think we should say good bye
I think my actions prove
that I have been faithful
to what we could have been
Now I will step aside
go find that special goal
you could not fill with me
I'm not gonna try to hide it
I'm your friend as always will be
Yes my heart is hurt
but i mean for you no ill
Yes I have changed a lot
and there is more that I'll be doing
but it doesn't change the fact
what's in my heart was very real
So if you want to go
I leave you an open door
I will be here when you get back
go find what you're looking for
Copyright ©
Archie
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2005-09-07 18:34:19]
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Re: An Open Door
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 08:14:17 PM AEST
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OMG!! Archie..this says EXACTLY how I feel about a friend of mine.... I am gonna send it to them to read it....
This was such a great piece of advice...one which I have started taking myself...in that I HAVE finally let go....
Thanks for sharing this....
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Re: An Open Door
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by Bruce on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 01:56:29 AM AEST
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| great write archie, hard for you I' am sure |
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Re: An Open Door
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 03:30:22 AM AEST
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this is a master peice of reality and touch me
in my heart and soul, u r a noble man as well
as a consistant poet . . .
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Re: An Open Door
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 02:18:54 PM AEST
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Oh wow...It seems a few people can relate quite well to this, and I must admit...I'm one of them! Yeah, a whole lot of what you had to say here is what I've felt recently. Great job expressing your feelings Archie...it's sad, but like you said, sometimes you just have to let go...
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Re: An Open Door
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 06:58:38 AM AEST
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Very sad and how true. Very good writing. Keep it up!
Tim |
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Re: An Open Door
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by inoc on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 08:32:50 AM AEST
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Unreal I can relate too....just last night I felt like exactly this....
anyway thanks Archie again for a masterpiece
coni |
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