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A Beautiful Night
Contributed by
firestorm12
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Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 09:20:00 AM in AEST
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The time we spent,
Last night together.
Was wonderful to me,
I wish it had lasted forever.
I don’t know what,
Will happen with us.
But your very beautiful,
As I look at you thus.
I enjoyed looking into,
Your beautiful eyes.
They where so bright,
Like stars in the sky.
We spent hours talking,
The time just flew.
I had a incredible time,
Last night with you.
We will take it slow,
We will have friendship first.
We will always have that,
If worst comes to worst.
I wanted to kiss you,
I’m scarred to admit.
It’s too soon for that,
Too soon to commit.
I wanted to reach out,
To take your hand in mine.
I was scarred what you’d think,
And that you would decline.
We talked for hours,
Though it seemed only one.
I enjoyed our talk,
I hope you had fun.
I hope that you don’t,
Get scarred by this letter.
For I only desire,
For us to get better.
I hope you enjoyed it,
As much as I.
You lifted my spirits,
And made me feel high.
By Pete Easley 14Jan03
Copyright ©
firestorm12
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2003-01-16 09:20:00]
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Re: A Beautiful Night
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 09:32:07 AM AEST
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| Well Pete with all your going through right now with your wife trying to find her self I think taking it slow would be best! If there is something more time will tell! You deserve to be happy! Christina |
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Re: A Beautiful Night
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by OreO on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 09:33:40 AM AEST
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Awwww Pete this is so sweet, sounds like you had a wonderful time ....keep your chin up always..things will get better ...
Follow your heart and search your soul
Only then will truth be known
Always write out just what you feel
Someone's heart out their you'll steal...
Trust in your heart and soul pete, and most of all beleive in yourself....we all have magic inside of us...most of us dont know how to use it ...i love this...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: A Beautiful Night
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by Septic on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 03:40:16 PM AEST
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| This was very lovely to read and straight from the heart. You are so right in saying that 'it's to soon to commit' - take your time and don't jump immediately into another relationship, no matter how good it appears at first. Take your time to find out who you are and what you really want from life first - just perhaps by being alone for a while. Keep on working on your poetry though as it's very theraputic for you whilst feeling this way. |
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Re: A Beautiful Night
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 04:01:53 PM AEST
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Lovely write..Enjoyed it immensely...
Jenni |
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Re: A Beautiful Night
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 03:00:51 AM AEST
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| SOUNDS LIKE YOU'RE A GOOD PERSON WITH GREAT POETRY! |
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Re: A Beautiful Night
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by linagalMBfan01 on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 08:29:01 PM AEST
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this was a vey touching poem. keep up the good work.
Lina |
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Re: A Beautiful Night
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by JacobsKK on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:35:16 PM AEST
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| Awww, how cute. This poem is so sincere. :-) |
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Re: A Beautiful Night
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by Midnight on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 06:05:18 PM AEST
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| Its a good poem. I like it alot. It's very creative and very a good idea at that. although it probaly could be more so, you know, it could be a bit bette and more flowing and poetic. but for now you did great job. by all means keep writing. I guese for some reson I have a very strong felling that if you just do a little more and arrange the words a little differently you cuold make something out of your self with this poem. but make saure you keep writing and remember dont get mad at mistakes learn from them and you will become even greater than your mind wants you to be. thank you I enjoyed reading your poem alot. oh and try free verse the final product always sounds beter that way. |
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