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Let me take you there.
Contributed by
remote
on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 02:48:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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All the places, that I've seen,
looking at all those beautiful things.
I wonder,if've I missed anything?
I look back over my shoulder,
there, around the last corner
I see, a lovely flower.
I can, take a few steps back
go, enjoy and not miss that
and, I wonder, whats ahead?
I am glad that I came this way
with all its mischiefs and sways
lovely things that I've seen said, stay.
Up ahead I see lovelier grounds
Come now hold my hand
for I'd want to take you there.
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Re: Let me take you there.
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by Wendy on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 02:51:24 PM AEST
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| I really like what this says. It describes my philosophy of life, always wanting and looking forward to what's ahead and afraid to miss anything. I don't mind backtracking a little from time to time because you never know what you will find. |
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Re: Let me take you there.
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by colinbaker62 on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 03:50:47 PM AEST
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This is a poem with a lovely message about life thus far, and what may be in the near and more distant future. Very nice indeed
Colin |
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Re: Let me take you there.
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 02:24:54 PM AEST
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Nice little light-hearted write...Life is full of many wonders for sure! Don't forget to stop and smell those roses once in awhile : )
Scorp. |
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Re: Let me take you there.
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by Archie on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 11:54:57 PM AEST
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| Thanks for sharing with the reader. I think your words take the reader on a journey into your life. |
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Re: Let me take you there.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 09:45:24 PM AEST
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| Thank you for taking us there. It was a VERY enjoyable trip. Really love this one. Thank you. |
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