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Play with me?
Contributed by
addicted2selfharm
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Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 02:05:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Your voice...so painful like a rusty nail into my heart.
With every word you speak a hammer shoves it farther in.
I've tried to tape it back together, used band-aids and all.
But everytime I think of the past summer, I fall to my knees and crawl.
Crawl for anything peaceful, anything to dry my tears.
But you cant dry broken tears, and theres no one who can hear me.
The band-aids and tape soaked from my heart, alot like the tape around my wrists.
I've tried to keep the bain inside, but it's too great to resist.
The sound of your own blood hitting the floor is so loud when your by yourself.
Pick the blood up, and put it in a jar keep it locked away.
Put a band-aid over the scar, keep it locked away.
And when they ask you what happened...shh...don't let anyone know how you really like to play.
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Re: Play with me?
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by WAE on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 02:29:20 PM AEST
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Well, depressing and heavy...
What I didn't like : broken tears(would you explain), repetition of band-aids, all in "used band-aids and all" sounds out of place...
E-mail me, if you wish...
Alex |
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Re: Play with me?
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by JustAGirl001 on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 03:37:36 PM AEST
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Mm..This is very good. I really like how you used the band-aids and tape. I'd of never thought of that.
Bleeding with you,
Emma♥ |
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Re: Play with me?
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 04:44:22 PM AEST
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Sad poem. It is also sad that you think no one hears you.
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Re: Play with me?
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by mysteriouslady on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 08:42:48 PM AEST
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| Great poem I like it! |
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