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Letting Go
Contributed by
EverlastingDawn
on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 07:46:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Walking down the halls
Whispers echo off the walls
Tales of petty tidbits
Talk about all the misfits
I move and I wonder where I stand
I don't really understand the demand
Looking at my reflection in a window
At an emptiness I've come to know
A ghost of a girl I once was
Why is she walking the way she does?
She seems familiar but I can't tell
Will she answer if I yell?
Tearing my eyes away from the translucent girl
I look ahead as the colors start to swirl
Tears are blurring my vision
I need to come to a decision
Would anyone even care at all?
I take a breath and I watch myself fall
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EverlastingDawn
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2005-09-07 07:46:21]
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Re: Letting Go
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by LilyFire on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 05:02:24 PM AEST
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| I know how you feel...sometimes it is hard to look back and then realize who you've become...sometimes, though, things aren't really as different as they seem to be. |
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Re: Letting Go
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 06:34:45 PM AEST
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There is much freedom in walking, and when one falls, they must ask themselves on the way down, where do they want to go...
the speaker in the write's vision is confusion.. something inside needs to be straightened out...
The ghost is our spiritual aspect of self..it is calling...teaching us to be receptive to happiness and tranquility, one must listen to it.. to find peace..time is taking off..learn to be ready and to discover what lies ahead..pray..there is someone greater than us.. His name is Jesus.. Fall into His arms.. He hears you, when you do not think anyone else does.
RL
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