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Tragedy In The Night
Contributed by
unlovedchild
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Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 11:55:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Silent pleasures
Mistaken measures
You've gone way too far
Hear the screaming
See the bleeding
Look what you've done tonight
The stairs are creaking
She's still weeping
How could you do this to me
Black and white picture
Now turned to red
The letters read
now I'm dead
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unlovedchild
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2005-09-06 23:55:05]
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Re: Tragedy In The Night
(User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 06:21:42 AM AEST
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Amy this was such a sad sad poem. I deffinately see growth in your writting.
This was such a cool poem, the rhyming and presentation was perfect.
Nicely done sweetie.
Luv,
Janey xxxx |
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Re: Tragedy In The Night
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:48:25 PM AEST
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O_O
That was freaky, and you know how much I like freaky! Seriously, this was greatly done, all hail the Gran Poetess Amy!!! |
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Re: Tragedy In The Night
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by Kiela_Rox_Mi_Socks on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 08:06:41 PM AEST
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wow sweetie this poem is.....well I can't find words to discribe how great it is, Keep Writing babe.
Love Always
Care |
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