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When I Rest
Contributed by
built2resist
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Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 11:06:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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When I rest
There comes in me a feeling
A feeling of recuperation
Mind, body, soul
A complete inner rejuvenation
No more painstaking back breaking inner quaking
A peaceful soul is hibernating
Now end this poem, bed is waiting
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Re: When I Rest
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by brew on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 11:08:27 PM AEST
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BLAH.sleep is over rated........i should know.......i never sleep. Its like I go to bed.lay there , sleep 4 hrs and im up.! been that way since I can remember, and Im 25 now.............Good psot tho.!
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Re: When I Rest
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by sick_n_twisted on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 01:01:03 AM AEST
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HAHA !! LOVE YOU POEM MAN !! it was really fin to read with all the rhymes and all awesome poem i love to sleep too ! lol i had to pull out the dictionary on recuperation lol im a little slow but NICE WORK !! love it !
D33,
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Re: When I Rest
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by Built2Resist on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 01:21:08 PM AEST
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| Haha thanks.. i try ;) Yeah i love sleeping.. its good stuff.. take care guys |
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