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California Really Is That BLUE
Contributed by
eleventoedsloth
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Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 09:26:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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If asked a week ago,
I would have told you that the salty smell of the ocean was relaxing,
but now it seems slightly nausiating.
It drives me crazy,
and makes my body quake home.
Mearly days ago,
the palm trees of paridise were inviting,
but now it seems as if they're pointing me back to from where I came.
Hostility's leaving,
and I cant wait until I can join it.
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eleventoedsloth
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2005-09-06 21:26:05]
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Re: California Really Is That BLUE
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 09:41:07 PM AEST
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Flee that madness! Heh. I grew up in California, but hated going to the beach, much as I love the ocean.
Southwestern Oregon is a much better place.
I did like this; simple, but expressive.
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Re: California Really Is That BLUE
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 09:49:16 PM AEST
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| Yeah, familiar surroundings bring me back to sanity too, when I've been away for a long time. |
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Re: California Really Is That BLUE
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by blondie_64865 on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 01:05:38 AM AEST
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| never been to california but it isn't sounding to pleasant but still a good poem |
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