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redundantly riduculed people
Contributed by
hardrocker15198916
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Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 07:42:33 PM in AEST
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lets be ridiculed
a harmless game
make fun of their clothes
make fun of thier names
lets taunt those so pathetic
and useless to me
something unrepaired
and violently unseen
causing that endless pain
struggling in sorrowful vain
atack her empty mind
that once beautiful brain
so redundant in its torment
ceasing to ever quit
but the final cause in its completion
wasnt anything shed ever get
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2005-09-06 19:42:33]
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Re: redundantly riduculed people
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 08:33:12 PM AEST
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| Wonderful poem and i can relate t this from my junior high school years. A lot of fights because people could not be mature. |
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Re: redundantly riduculed people
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 08:42:12 PM AEST
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is it awful when people (most likely children or adolescents) are tormented by this physical and emotional abuse...its horrible.
I liked your conveyance of how much this can affect a person, and you seemed to be writing from the stand point of the "bully."
Good effort here. |
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Re: redundantly riduculed people
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by sride686 on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 06:39:21 AM AEST
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| Wow now this was a good write girl. It really got the point across and I really feel the truth and pain if the way life is to most. Very well done and I hope to see more of your writes when I have the time. Talk to you later….Steve |
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Re: redundantly riduculed people
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by JGB on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 12:26:46 PM AEST
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Had a brother like this once. It's a good thing for him and for me I could look past his old nasty habits and we could both move on.
Great write. |
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