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Longing To
Contributed by
NoangelNohope
on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 07:35:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I long to be one of them.
To drink freely with out regret
The night calls me out into
it and wraps me with its cool
blanket of darkness and mystery
A new life waiting to be lived
in. I, waiting for my
blood God to awaken and
make me a blood Angel.
Escape is all it is, an escape
from this world of mine that
I've lost control of and am
now just wandering through
I shall wait for my
glorious day to come when
all my blood lustful
prayers are answered and I
awaken in the dark, night filled
heaven I can call
HOME
Where all my brothers and
sisters welcome me with
open arms and sharpened
fangs.
Copyright ©
NoangelNohope
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2005-09-06 19:35:43]
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Re: Longing To
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 08:42:03 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem. You long for a wonderful prize. |
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Re: Longing To
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 08:45:32 PM AEST
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Awesome...im reluctant to admit lol but I have always thought it would be cool to be a vampire...they appear so glamourous and yet....terrifying in a way. I dont know, one of those things ay.
I thought this was an excellent poem, dark and somewhat hopeful. Oh and I loved the ending, that just made it.
A real pleasure. |
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Re: Longing To
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by igba on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 06:02:18 AM AEST
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| exceptionally wierd |
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Re: Longing To
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by Loende on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 11:06:32 PM AEST
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I LOVE your topic and I really liked your poem. I think that the dark mystery behind vampires inspires one's imagination to take flight. Good job.
Be well,
Loende |
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Re: Longing To
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 01:56:53 AM AEST
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| hmm,a sweet escape indeed.... |
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Re: Longing To
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by candysears on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 09:36:10 PM AEST
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A very good write
But i most admit i'm somewhat afraid of vampires...lol...
God Bless! |
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