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Someday
Contributed by
jacobmanning
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Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 04:20:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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As I sit and watch the rolling sea
I wonder if true love between us can ever be
In my heart are feelings that I can not explain
But the words that come to mind are so simple and plain
They are words like "I love you", "I need you", or "It's just the thought of you"
But when these words come to my mind I don't know what to do
I don't know if I should forget it or just give it time
I wish I could keep my heart from controlling my mind
I know someday my true feelings I will find
But only when it is right and in due time
Copyright ©
jacobmanning
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2005-09-06 16:20:26]
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Re: Someday
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by just-b on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 04:37:46 PM AEST
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| great display of true feelings! I liked this very much. From the heart way to go ! |
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Re: Someday
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 05:18:50 PM AEST
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Hmmm I may have to visit your account page soon...I'm finding your thoughts mirroring my reality at the moment. Another good write, with honest
(and conflicted) expression. I hope for your sake she waits around for you. Welcome to YPDC btw!
Scorp. |
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Re: Someday
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 08:58:36 PM AEST
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ive felt this way before...so unsure of someone.
A pleasure to read, written very well. |
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