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Everything In The World
Contributed by
Shnannon
on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 12:49:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The tears run down my cheeks
For what feels like the millionth night in a row.
I've just left a crowd of friends
But I feel so alone.
All the happy music in the world
Can't help me escape the pain I feel.
The anger courses through my veins
It never seems to go away.
Everyone else was so happy
Even I smiled and laughed.
All the screaming my voice could take
Won't release the frustration I feel.
The words flow out of my pen
It's the only way I can let out how I truly feel inside.
No one understand
How confusing my life is.
All the ink in the world
Couldn't express the emotions I'm experiencing.
Copyright ©
Shnannon
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2005-09-06 12:49:42]
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Re: Everything In The World
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by Destined_for_this on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 01:35:18 PM AEST
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| This seems like an abstract poem more than emotional. You bounce around many emotions yes, but there is no real direction. I hope you can get a handle on this. |
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Re: Everything In The World
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 03:31:07 AM AEST
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"All the ink in the world
Couldn't express the emotions I'm experiencing."
Wow...I really enjoyed this piece. Wonderful work! |
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