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Alone Time
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 11:47:38 AM in AEST
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I need my alone time
The time when I say I’m fine
But really it’s just a lie
Until I tell you goodbye
It’s my time to be alone
And handle it on my own
My time to push you away
Don’t worry; it will end someday,
Probably in a few years
That is, if I am still here
It is my time to help you
Prove that I am true, too
Time to not let you help me
Time to close off, don’t you see?
Time to block everyone out
And close my heart’s house
Time to keep everyone far away
Maybe my heart will talk someday
But now it needs some alone time
When it will always say it is fine
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Re: Alone Time
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by Destined_for_this on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 12:05:16 PM AEST
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| This is not to bad, seems you have something to prove. I feel what your saying in this. The desire to find the way is in all of us. |
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Re: Alone Time
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 03:01:40 PM AEST
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Sprints, something about this write really resonates with me. Your words have a deceiving depth to them in this piece, and it stood out, in a very good way. Great job!
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Re: Alone Time
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by mylady on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 03:03:25 PM AEST
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Very nice ... Like the the last part...
Maybe my heart will talk someday
But now it needs some alone time
When it will always say it is fine .....
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Re: Alone Time
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by blue_angel on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 11:38:19 AM AEST
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yo shell this is awesome!!
i do agree although i prefer to be in the company of someone i care about who cares about me... ya know...
good job again
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Re: Alone Time
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by Bones on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 07:46:49 PM AEST
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Time alone...we all need that sometimes don't we? It's the time when we get our thoughts and beliefs straighten out. The time sometimes needed the most when things are looking down. I like the way you presented such a time in your life. There's alot rhyme in this poem I've noticed. I don't know if you intended that to happen, but it sounds awesome. (I'm talking about internal rhyme, by the way.) 7/5 lol
Peace,
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