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Lovers Rap
Contributed by
spike
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Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 09:53:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Its like a tidal wave, a force of nature
A beast in the jungle out to get ya
It’ll take you quick, like a tiger
And wrap you up like a spider
It grabs your heart in a grip so tight
You’ll find it hard to breath at night
You’ll think it till it makes you sick,
Full of the smell of it
Your head aches
Your heart is thumpin,
This is real pain that you can’t act
Its love baby, and that’s a fact.
Copyright ©
spike
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2005-09-06 09:53:24]
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Re: Lovers Rap
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 11:23:34 AM AEST
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| This is good. You have expressed a lot of emotion in this. I think love can be like a flood sometimes too. |
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Re: Lovers Rap
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 11:48:27 AM AEST
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Wow, I like it! you expressed yourself very freely. Good Job!
-xoxo- |
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Re: Lovers Rap
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 05:07:11 AM AEST
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One of love's many faces, well portrayed.
I'll be back later to check more of your work, but it's 1:58am, so bye.
Take care.
David |
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Re: Lovers Rap
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 05:18:55 PM AEST
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*applauds wildly*
You captured the, uhm, what was it you said? Oh yes,
intoxicating and sobering thrill expertly!
I relate.....boy do I relate!!!!
~Breezy |
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Re: Lovers Rap
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by Archie on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 01:07:32 AM AEST
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| I had to laugh when i read that poem. This is true. Great write. |
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