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A Trust
Contributed by
weepingprophet
on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 02:48:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Ignore the fault and backup of the system.
Shut down and cast away, dreaded.
Somehow the lines form together, picture of a united front.
And fade.
Out of the dusk of our hearts we are left with the familiar remembrance of our denial.
Simple of each other and distant for the self-search, feeble climb, victory, a stretch.
For truth we will endure the unthinkable and un-regrettable.
In choices we find the relation of truth and lie, here the sacrifice of knowledge for acceptance.
Through the halls of betrayal where the hearts grow fond of distrust and loathing.
Recapture the unimaginable, a trust that surpasses doubt and longing.
Human hearts incapable of what we all strive but never reach.
There are ladders and crusaders but heroes; they are a dying breed, a lost race.
Where do we emerge from the ashes, left over and forgotten, arise the dawn of eternal flaws.
These hands only sustain the remorse of the lost.
Through wreckage and submersed in all hope we are brought forth unto the earth like a new species, a hybrid.
So crumble and sway to the sound of our preaching, never before, or again and remember.
We are the saints of the ending, the sacrifice for a beginning and we live through compassion, bleed through the grace, of denial and sufferance.
Recapture the unimaginable, a trust that surpasses all doubt and longing.
Copyright ©
weepingprophet
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2005-09-06 02:48:02]
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Re: A Trust
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 04:23:05 AM AEST
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Very meaningful, and fully eloquent. To be quite honest, it was a hard beginning to get into. But the ending was inspiring. Well done!
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Re: A Trust
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by Caged Soul on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 08:56:52 AM AEST
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This poem has real presence. It is thought- provoking and real. I like it when in your note you say "ramblings of truth drunk with reality" because that is what we need right now, the truth, no matter how disorientated it may make us feel. Yet there are still people who seek refuge in deception for reasons unclear to me.
Once again big ups on a great rhyme.
~souLBro~ |
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Re: A Trust
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by In_a_while on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 04:38:26 PM AEST
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Very heavy and wrought with the truth...
as well as savage questioning of what we accept
in our daily lives with regards the choices we make
in life.
My fave line?
"In choices we find the relation of truth and lie,
here the sacrifice of knowledge for acceptance."
very real and very strong minded writing
i tip my hat to your ability
keep it up |
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