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Logical Madness
Contributed by
MadCackle
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Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 10:25:04 PM in AEST
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what is it about these ones, we call crazy
scared of the three others they talk to
or are the doctors just plain lazy
just who gets to decide whats right and sane
who hasn't let loose with thier feelings
who hasn't consulted with the other side of the brain
heres something to loosen your head, and to stir the noodle
just who should be labled, the 3 year old child
or the first person to shave, a pure bred poodle
now that your thinking in a crazy sence
we can walk down the less travled path
were there are no boundries, there is no fence
I know what your thinking, you've herd this befor
one pluss three..... should, no .....must equal four
see your doing it now, with out even knowing
are you going to introduce me to your friend
or are they just saying hi and already going
the mind is such.. such a beautiful place
were nothing matters not even a taste
of the short legged tortous who finished the race
or the white coated doctor who covered your case
its a puzzle thats not ment to be finished
not cheated drugged deprived diminished
its a place for fun giggling and laughter
the place to go, befor and certainly not after
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MadCackle
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Re: Logical Madness
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 10:52:01 PM AEST
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Oh my you had me rolling with laughter here..
LOL.. And yes, of course I counted lol.
****the mind is such.. such a beautiful place
were nothing matters not even a taste
of the short legged tortous who finished the race
or the white coated doctor who covered your case
LOL
****its a place for fun giggling and laughter
the place to go, befor and certainly not after
Yes, I should like to visit my mind more often to find the funny stuff.
Oh my, keep writing, your a hoot : ))
Really loosened me up lol.
not that way , lol..
Raquel Leah |
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Re: Logical Madness
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 11:23:35 PM AEST
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ooo I like it!!!!!
You've composed this poem of subtle insanity very well.....and sometimes the silly thoughts transform into a brilliant poem....like yours today.
Well done, great job. |
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Re: Logical Madness
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by Doubtless_One on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 12:05:17 AM AEST
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That was great really just a fun read
great write |
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Re: Logical Madness
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 04:31:44 AM AEST
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I do like this. A good bit of rambling insanity, of the finest grade. There is quite a bit of spelling imperfections, but other than that, this is a fine, thought-provoking piece.
Nicely done.
Andrew |
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Re: Logical Madness
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by NoangelNohope on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 08:09:01 PM AEST
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| wow!! you reallly got me thinking there!! and thinking that maybe if ppl would through the labels "crazy, insane" and ***** like that around, then MAYBE we could ACTUALLY begin to learn more about our own brains, and become SMARTER and MORE sane...well sane in the term of docters.....though i like being a bit crazy you know? lol ;) =) |
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