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Love Of My Life
Contributed by
Steve_Class
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Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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We met for the first time,
I still know what you wore,
I’ll remember for a lifetime,
Perhaps, even more.
For you I would lust,
So I made you a friend,
That friend I now love,
When will this pain end?
As the days pass by,
We laugh, dance and sing,
I keep asking myself why?
Your heart I can’t win.
For both not just you,
My head says “The timings not right”
My heart doesn’t think so,
And it wins the fight.
One thing I’m sure of,
My feelings are true,
If love is a drug,
I’m addicted to you.
Copyright ©
Steve_Class
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2003-01-16 03:00:00]
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Re: Love Of My Life
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 08:39:17 AM AEST
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| I surely know of this addiction drug...love!!!!!!......Take care....a good write.... from Mystery_Girl.....opps forgot to log in sorry......:-) |
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Re: Love Of My Life
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by OreO on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 08:53:41 AM AEST
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This is absolutely beautiful....geez i hope the girl you wrote this for saw this or sees' it...she will surely melt and lose her breath...thanks for sharing this one i love the last line.....if love is a drug, im addicted to you....love it....
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Re: Love Of My Life
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by mckayla on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 03:58:28 PM AEST
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What a beautiful poem!! made so much sense!! what a lucky girl!lol
mckayla |
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Re: Love Of My Life
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 04:35:36 PM AEST
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| Steve,I so loved this peice it was so romantic,The girl must have loved this poetry to her! Great write! Christina |
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Re: Love Of My Life
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by Chrissie on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 06:51:18 AM AEST
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Another beautiful heartfelt poem. Steve
Chrissie |
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Re: Love Of My Life
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by angelrae on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 08:03:17 AM AEST
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| A beautiful write. Love is such a mystery. May eyes open to this love you have. |
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Re: Love Of My Life
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by midian on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 03:09:53 PM AEST
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| a powerful heart felt write from hte heart i loved the last 4 lines |
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