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About Angels
Contributed by
FlirtQueen
on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 08:55:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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She sits listening to the angels wings
The soft whisper of their song
Yet here she'll wait alone
Searching for the one
Heavy and staggered breathes follow
It's the question all have dread
Will He accept her
Or will she stay on the ground
Small clasped hands rest on her knee
She can't decide what's right and wrong
She begs for the answer
Though the conclusion never comes
She feels the angels touch
and smells the triumphant scent
Her thoughts race to the finish
And there she finds the solution
No one is there waiting
and that is how she knows
that He will except her
When it's her time to go!
Copyright ©
FlirtQueen
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2005-09-05 20:55:53]
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Re: About Angels
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 08:58:07 PM AEST
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| A very beautiful poem, I liked the ending it topped it off. SLipSiX. |
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Re: About Angels
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by MadCackle on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 11:14:39 PM AEST
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| I am not usually intrigued by angle/religion type poetry however nice writ the last verse concludes it nicely |
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Re: About Angels
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by Loende on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 03:36:16 AM AEST
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Beautifully brought to a close. A few spelling issues, but all in all, a nice piece.
Loende |
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Re: About Angels
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 05:19:30 AM AEST
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This was such a beautiful poem. I love the vivd images that spring my minds eye.
I also love the way you used detils for this. Thanks for sharing your awesome poem.
Jane~ |
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