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You and me
Contributed by
Calliope
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Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 08:34:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I looked at you from across the room.Our eyes met.You smiled lightly and turned away.How could you and I not be as close?We have been friends all our lives and yet now...we have drifted so far apart.I love you.You are like my brother.I just want to be closer to you.Why wont you stay with me when I am down.You and I go way back.We are almost like family.So tell me how am I supposed to go on with life knowing you'll never be my "brother"?
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Re: You and me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 08:51:32 PM AEST
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| Ok this was a good poem, I understand where you are going with this. SLipSiX. |
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Re: You and me
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by loragoeshollywood on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 10:59:51 PM AEST
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aww i really like that poem.
hope it works out??..
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Re: You and me
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 08:01:30 PM AEST
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I think this is my favorite of yours. It caries so much longing... a beautiful thing, especially to write about.
Take care.
David |
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