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Dim
Contributed by
mangos
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Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 08:07:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Radical reconstructive surgery
The painting that once glittered is dim with pity
Towers that once stood higher than its peers
Giving definition and structure to the drop of a tear
Skin so soft, hairless without the rough
A face worn from the sun and the years in the dust
Friends that fell away into a memory of trust and love
Recapturing the innocence of a first touch from the tongue
It is the present moment that aches in my head
Knowing of yesterdays and ignorant of what comes after instead
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Re: Dim
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 09:04:04 PM AEST
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| Hm a very interesting poem, I liked it. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Dim
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 09:15:06 PM AEST
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| Very interesting, to say the least. I do like it, please don't misunderstand me. It's just I'm a little dim sometimes. :) |
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Re: Dim
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 02:38:05 AM AEST
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This had a nice flow to it, and some interesting thoughts. I hope you always keep writing...
Scorp. |
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