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nothing feels right

Contributed by EVERxSOxSWEET on Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 07:01:49 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

the flowers you gave me died,
so i buried them in the yard.
I dont know if i want the shirt you gave me anymore
even after i washed it
it still smells of you
and im not sure if i can deal with that right now.
Im kind of falling apart to our song
and i dont really know what to do.
i knew this would happen,
but i didnt think it would be so soon.
and there was that tiny part of me that thought
that you had changed
i was so wrong.
i wonder if you're still wearing my hair tie
on your wrist.
i wonder if everytime you look at it you think of me
or if it's laying buried on your desk somewhere
or maybe even in the trash.
and that butterfly i compared you to
it wasnt as innocent as i thought
and as soon as i thought it landed
it flew away again
i wore blue and yellow bracelets
because "i relied on you, like yellow does on blue"
but now im taking them off
because it just reminds me of you
everything does.
i remember when my hair was long
you loved it,
you'd always play with it
i never told you this,
but thats why i cut it all off a few months ago.
and now i'll never let it grow long again
you've changed the way i live
you make me want to not even breathe
i hope your happy now.
because that was all that ever mattered
wasnt it?

Copyright © EVERxSOxSWEET ... [ 2005-09-05 19:01:49]
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