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Wounds Cut Deep(Song Version)
Contributed by
JustAGirl001
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Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 04:36:33 PM in AEST
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Deep inside of me,
are wounds you cannot see.
Locked up so deep inside,
are all the tears I've cried.
So tell me what to do,
when all I see is you.
These wounds are cut deep,
and these secrets I just can't keep.
So I let the blood seep,
through the wounds cut deep.
Deep in side of me,
is who I pretend to be.
Locked up so deep inside,
are all the truths I've lied.
So tell me what I should do,
when all I've done is lie to you.
These wounds are cut deep,
and these secrets I just can't keep.
So I let the blood seep,
through the wounds cut deep.
Deep inside of me,
is a judge that proves me guilty.
Locked up so deep inside,
are all the crimes I try to hide.
So tell me what I should do when all I've done is betray you.
Copyright ©
JustAGirl001
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2005-09-05 16:36:33]
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Re: Wounds Cut Deep(Song Version)
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by bluesbaby811 on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 04:53:22 PM AEST
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| I really liked this poem its deep and powerful it makes me feel your pain |
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Re: Wounds Cut Deep(Song Version)
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 06:19:58 PM AEST
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Really good song, writting the lyrics and being able to connect it with the music is a great talent. If this is about someone, my only advice would be to tell them, start over, it's never to late to tell the truth, hiding it will only make it build up inside, causing more pain, and self inflicted pain only relieves the pain around you for a short while. Lift your head high and smile, but don't hide things, don't be afraid to be open with someone you care about. You're very talented, can't wait to see more.
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Re: Wounds Cut Deep(Song Version)
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by justme03 on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 06:57:09 PM AEST
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O...M...G!
this is liek da best thing ive read of yours! i LOVE this alot! Have you put this to music yet? it rox! :D lylas!
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Re: Wounds Cut Deep(Song Version)
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 01:32:27 PM AEST
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Well, let the blood pressure out. Tears stay in. Blood is thicker than water. More weight.
The way I see it, the blood was able to escape, through the wounds. No tough scars yet, or else be too tough to escape..
So, there is hope yet, but why are you deserting someone you love. Is it the character that is the enemy of himself, or to the one he loves.
Good write.
Message me to explain the song, thank you,
Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: Wounds Cut Deep(Song Version)
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by NoangelNohope on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 07:08:11 PM AEST
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| now if only i could wake up one morning to my alarm radio and here this song playing....i could definetly get through the day. |
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Re: Wounds Cut Deep(Song Version)
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by JustAGirl001 on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 03:09:20 PM AEST
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| I never really post on my own comment boards, but here it goes. Lol. No, I have not put it to music yet, but I'm currently working on a piano piece xD I don't think it'll make it on the radio anytime soon because I'd have to find somebody to sing it cuz' I suck. x( But you just watch 12 years from now you'll wake up and you'll hear it and make sure you think of me. xD |
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