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on this hollow eve
Contributed by
paul_x_walker
on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 04:16:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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i feel you
i no your here
i hear you
you have no fear
hideing in the shadows
watching my every move
my blood is raceing
paceing back and forth
getting closer
coming up behind
making my mind go crazy
on this hollow eve
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Re: on this hollow eve
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 06:21:20 PM AEST
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Very good write, anything that comes from the heart or means something, is good in its own way. Great job, can't wait to see more.
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Re: on this hollow eve
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by MadCackle on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 11:50:54 PM AEST
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| this poem can relate to alot of things if you think about it short but sweet nice writ |
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Re: on this hollow eve
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by troubled on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 02:19:36 PM AEST
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