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a rose death
Contributed by
seci
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Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 01:27:47 PM in AEST
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she's yelling, i'm listening, but trying my best to walk away
how long can i take this pain
how long do i have to stay here
can i face one more day
things aren't like they use to be
daddy left when i was four and every since we've been struggling
momma wants competition with me
she picks fights and tell me who in the hell she thinks i might be
never been close, never had that mother and daughter relationship
now all she does is scream
i'm losing my grip
what's wrong
she wants to make sure i am no ways strong
she tells me that i'm not perfect or i can't do anything
i try to keep quiet and to myself i sing
she's braking me apart
there is no need on earth to put the picture back together
we have already shattered apart
forever, forever and forever
my oldest sister i have not spoken to in 3 years
i decided to move on
and forget my fears
my father has a phone
he has not call me in awhile
i put these things behind and sit in a room alone and try hard to smile
i've been used for money, sex and drugs and i'm only 17
once i stop eating
i was to damn addicted to the fien
who am i now, my mother or i less know
she can't tell me who i am
even if she could the things she thought she knew about me would only force here 6 feet underneath the ground
still in school
but at times i feel like the fool
i know everyone is talking about me, but i have to move on
this is who i choose to be
my life only gets harder as i really know
but like a rose that is about to die, i have to push along and continue somehow and someway to grow
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Re: a rose death
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 01:31:36 PM AEST
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| A beautiful poem, keep hanging on. SLipSiX. |
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Re: a rose death
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by Naveen on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 02:04:05 PM AEST
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Nice poem,
Some lines seems be telling my story.
I think, I am also on your sides.
My life is in hard rocks.
I am a stammerer,
I can't talk I can't express my thoughts
ideas to world
I fear going for interviews. i fear talkin to peers.
But still like a knight in the storms
I am fighting untill there hope that in my life will strike a silver lining some day. |
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Re: a rose death
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by dagonet on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 04:11:39 PM AEST
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an absolutely beautiful poem, the subject is so well put across, so much talent, but such misfortune that the subject has to be so horrific. im sorry if u suffer these things, no on deserves it, especially not someone with your talent.
keep writing, especially if it helps
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Re: a rose death
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 06:30:52 PM AEST
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And all that matters, is that you know that. No one but your self can bring you down, others can try, but if you force them out, refusing to be pushed downward, you won't be. Just keep your head high, be strong, and forget about everything bad people say, and don't get manipulated. You can be who you want to be, no one can tell you other wise. Very good write, keep it up.
- Cassy |
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