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TASTE OF NECTAR
Contributed by
sweetangeluk
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Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 08:59:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
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TASTE OF NECTAR
Take a sip of nectar archers berry
Cool yourself down with a spray of cherry
There he stood just a heartbeat away
Rose petal water a fine display
Shopping at tescos on this sunny day
Feelings of passion sweep me away
An adonis with eyes of crystal blue
Take a sip of love.. mutters thank you
Orgasmic rush flowing through my veins
Shopping list forgotten no longer remains
Our eyes lock for a few moments in time
Eyes burning with passion feelings sublime
Arousing desires overcome with his charms
Erotic fantasies wrapped me in his arms
The smile that you wore your beautiful hair
Words of beauty whispered skin care
Trying to avoid your soft warm touch
Crimson aroma this passion too much
Can i taste your loves blood once more
Your nectar seepes through every pore
Touching exploring tasting the desire
A stranger today set my heart on fire
Closing my eyes I feel it deja vu
Left a thirst for just a taste of you
Love Angelxxxx
Copyright ©
sweetangeluk
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Re: TASTE OF NECTAR
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by Archie on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 01:38:30 PM AEST
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| Okay turn off the blow torch you're shopping. This was a great write. Your write is very passionate. |
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Re: TASTE OF NECTAR
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 02:29:50 PM AEST
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| A blow torch? Lol, haha that was funny. Um anyway, this was a very beautifull sexy romantic poem, I loved it, it filled my heart with warmth. SLipSiX. |
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Re: TASTE OF NECTAR
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 05:03:48 PM AEST
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God how sexy and mezmerising is this?
Angel this was just 100% perfection. I love the flow and rhymes of this peice.
Thanks for posting.
Hugs,
Jane~ |
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Re: TASTE OF NECTAR
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 05:17:40 PM AEST
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truely beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: TASTE OF NECTAR
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 05:50:56 PM AEST
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| A great write. Had loadsa good things about it. Loved the flow and the theme. Chris. |
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Re: TASTE OF NECTAR
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 06:18:57 PM AEST
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Angel this was a sexy, captivating and romantic write. I think I'll go shopping too, lol. An absolutely remarkable and captivating poem.
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer |
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Re: TASTE OF NECTAR
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by FleurdeSang on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 07:52:05 PM AEST
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Siiiggghhh...
Ah, l'amour, it is sweet, no? ^.^
Scrumptious piece of writing, cheri!! The fruit of passion is most definately savored in this one. Magnifique, dear, and I am SO happy to see you posting again! I've missed you/your words! *Hugs* VERY descriptive and oh, so vivid... as if I were standing, as you said, "only a heartbeat away"... Divine, ma amie, simply divine. But that is not surprising coming from you, :-). LOVED this!! I can't wait to see what other diddlys you have up your sleeve!! Welcome back, sweetangel, and I hope your family, life, and love are doing splendidly!! All my love. Forever,
Your little rose petal,
~*Stephy*~ P.S.- Thank you SO much for your lovely comments, as always, they are very appreciated!! *smoochies and hugs* |
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Re: TASTE OF NECTAR
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 10:55:44 PM AEST
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You devil you ( smiles)
This is sexy and enticing and..and...
Sometimes once glace can light fire in us eh my friend?
I loved this naughty little write
Very well done
Roses..many many roses
Larry |
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Re: TASTE OF NECTAR
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by Destined_for_this on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 10:25:09 AM AEST
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| WOW, Splended writing on your part. I felt the electricity of the story and your style. Very good.! |
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Re: TASTE OF NECTAR
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 07:15:24 PM AEST
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Woo hoo Angel!! Good to see a new post from ya! Great wordplay going on in this write. Way to go girl ; )
Scorp. |
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Re: TASTE OF NECTAR
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 01:25:08 PM AEST
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A very sensual piece, yes it just drips of the nector of sexuality.
Wonderful write. |
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Re: TASTE OF NECTAR
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 02:04:37 PM AEST
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Wow Angel my dear, I was trying to relate to your wonderful poem here.........wow is all I have to say.
Your poetry is always well written, and I love the way you reveal your inner most feelings. 'tis a very brave thing to do.
Wondefful
Warm love
consuemom |
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Re: TASTE OF NECTAR
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 02:36:03 PM AEST
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All this time I thought shopping was just about going out to buy the items you needed !!
Interesting and unusual treatment of the subject matter here, good work
Steve |
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