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She looks out for me
Contributed by
frozensuicide
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Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 01:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She looks out for me when im sad,
She looks out for me when im confused,
She looks out for me when im mad,
She looks out for me when im bemused.
She’s always caring,
She’s beautiful.
She’s always daring,
She’s exceptional.
She’s wild,
I’m mild.
She’s pretty,
Im witty.
She’s my sister.
I love her more than she can envision,
I’m her sister,
She makes me take the right decision.
Sometimes I wish I were her,
She has everything.
She has friends that care for her,
She even has a boyfriend that is something.
She looks out for me when I cry,
She looks out for me when I’m broken,
She looks out for me when I want to die.
She looks out for me when I’m outspoken.
She looks up to me…
But I look more up to her.
She’s more than I could ever be,
She has a future.
It’s hard not to be jealous,
Everyone loves her.
They think she is zealous,
She’s everything everyone one would prefer.
She doesn’t realize all she has,
She has good grades,
She gets smiles and she isn’t a spaz,
And she knows how to stay away from blades.
She helps me when im down,
She helps me out all the time…
I never help it when she has a frown,
Next to her, I just feel like grime.
She’s my younger sister,
But she acts like the oldest.
I’d probably be dead with out my sister,
She’s the boldest.
I love her with all of my heart.
I love her more than just a sister.
I miss her when we’re far apart,
I’d cry for her when she was heart broken and with a blister.
She looks out for me everyday of the year.
She looks out for me when I need it.
She looks out for me with her faith in me takes away my fear,
She looks out for me when I would do it.
My sister cries for me,
My sister cares for me.
My sister keeps secrets for me,
My sister is better than me.
I’m sorry forever screaming at you,
I’m sorry for always bothering you,
Im sorry forever in doubting you.
Im sorry for not being there for you.
You showed fear for me when no one else did.
She cried for me when no one else would.
You wanted to help me when I did what I did,
You were there when no one else could.
Now I will look out for you just like you did for me.
Now I will help you just like you did for me.
Now I will cry for you just like you did for me.
Now I will protect you just like you did for me.
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frozensuicide
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2003-01-16 01:20:00]
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Re: She looks out for me
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by venkat on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 02:03:13 AM AEST
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| Wow, the ending of the poem looks very nice. congrats, you are such a nice girl...Venkat |
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Re: She looks out for me
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by OreO on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 04:33:19 AM AEST
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This is lovely.....absolutely lovely....and the way you show your love for your sister is so beautiful....this is one to be treasured for all time...thank you for sharing this one....love it...
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Re: She looks out for me
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 09:06:46 PM AEST
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Wow, Lelu this was absoultely beautiful I enjoyed reading this a lot. Almost made me cry.
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