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7 Days
Contributed by
sick_n_twisted
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Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 04:49:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Its like I've been here for so long
Sometimes 7 days can seem like forever
I never felt like I've actually liked anyone
First time I saw you,I liked you
I ask you a simple thing
You said no
My nails,my hair,my clothes
I did them all for you
Then you dont show
Thats how flings are...I guess...
I cant belive Im leaving already
Once again in my ****** little room
Just stairing into space
Dreaming about you
Thinkin' bout you
You didnt know you'd hurt me that much
Well why would you wonder if you didnt care
I dont know whats wrong with me
When I've just known you for 7 days
7 days and I miss you already
Well sometimes 7 days can feel like forever
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Re: 7 Days
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 06:58:45 AM AEST (User
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I can feel regret and sadness with each line. You have written your feelings well in this peice.
Nicely done!
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Re: 7 Days
(User Rating: 1 ) by Caged Soul on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 07:11:56 AM AEST (User
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Let me tell you; it only takes 7 days to fall in love with someone. There's this old guy who lives next to us who propossed to his wife after knowing her for just six days and they're still happy after more than 40 years. Now I'm not saying this person may be "the one", all I'm saying is that it's completely natural to feel this way. As for the poem, you have really done a good job in expressing how you feel. Just one small thing- you said "stairing" instead of "staring" in one of the lines, but other than that it's a cool poem.
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Re: 7 Days
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 02:36:46 PM AEST (User
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Interesting. |
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Re: 7 Days
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 01:34:44 AM AEST (User
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Hmmm I know this feeling, and you can, under the right circumstances get close with someone in such a short time. If he doesn't care for you though, don't waste your thoughts : )
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Re: 7 Days
(User Rating: 1 ) by angel_eyes70 on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 11:20:16 PM AEST (User
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Eww Denise, I didn't know that Person that much!!!!! But anyways as I was saying......EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!! wait.... is this about Robert? Well if it is..... EWWWWW thats gross, I mean its Robert! Next time you come here, I don't know what I will do to keep you two away, I mean thats SO, SO, SO ewwwwwwwww! lol at lest your with someone better than Robert. |
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