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Tongue Twister
Contributed by
mckayla
on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 12:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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weeping willows watch
women waist water washing
worries where white warriors
wait
saints stand silently
starring straight so
stars stay shining
men mock mountains
magically mountains mock men
mabey men might make mountains
mole-hills
fairies float fieriously
from far
fighting foes for fun
fading faintly for families
fate
daisies dance delightfuly
darring daffidales dive daintfully
dandilions dine deers daily
Copyright ©2003 Katherine L Chaffee
Copyright ©
mckayla
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2003-01-16 00:20:00]
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Re: Tongue Twister
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by OreO on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 04:16:04 AM AEST
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Oh how lovely i really enjoyed this children's poem...it's quite hard to say....as the tongue just wants to go like thisad laaldadlfa;dfkla dd LOL....thank you Katherine your poetry is truly inspiring...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Tongue Twister
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by kegs04 on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 07:45:07 PM AEST
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i enjoyed this poem, i found it to be rather delighful :-)
~peace out |
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Re: Tongue Twister
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by Keatsdogg on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 02:28:28 PM AEST
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| I like this. |
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Re: Tongue Twister
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 02:29:46 AM AEST
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| you have written of all the the things i love... great poem! |
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Re: Tongue Twister
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 08:05:01 PM AEST
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Mckayla
Good fun this one
Have you read my "Try counting sheep" it's sort of along the same lines
Your choice of nickname intrigues me since it is so close to my scottish clan name or is that just a coincidenece? |
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Re: Tongue Twister
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 07:30:39 PM AEST
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Hi Katherine,
I do like tongue twisters and this one certainly did it! I like it lots, it's mad :-P
You may like my 'Dear D......' one?!?
And thankyou for the kind comments.
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Tongue Twister
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by karoody on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 06:08:41 PM AEST
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very creative...you write so many styles...great talent
:-)
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Re: Tongue Twister
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by ArdRi79 on
Saturday, 22nd November 2003 @ 11:22:32 PM AEST
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| I love this one reading it out loud was a laugh |
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