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yes yes a million times i hate you
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 08:53:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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new beginnings
are far to difficult
when the
past endings
have only ended to you
[and not the rest of the world]
i believe in THIS
you show me your life
but i ask
what is THIS
you truly love me
to avoid the world
but when you love me
THIS is causing the world to avoid you...
begone
fortold lies are prophecies to the men who give their children up to poison themselves with their lusts
fornication...
your mind has become
question THIS
who ever gave you the right to live?
mock me
so i can see what i look like when i face you in those halls
the ones full of memories
i want to see the pain in your eyes [that pain that is your beauty]
yes... i believe that i give up in believin
THIS IS IT!
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2005-09-04 20:53:11]
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Re: yes yes a million times i hate you
(User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 09:11:24 PM AEST
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I would greatly like to know who you are talking to in this poem. It sounds like some one who you had great trust in who let you down.
It actually sounds more like a misunderstanding If I think it is who you are talking to.
I await your answer. |
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Re: yes yes a million times i hate you
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by russ-dawg on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 08:39:28 PM AEST
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| you are wicked with those writing skills! |
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