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writer's block
Contributed by
needs_change
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Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 07:31:44 PM in AEST
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i'm running out of words to write.
i have written them all.
my emotions are running wild.
no way to descibe them all.
irony isn't working.
honesty doesn't so to good.
the things that i try to say
aren't coming out like they should.
this paper remains blank.
it will be for a while.
i have no need to vent.
because now i can finally smile.
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Re: writer's block
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by Archie on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 07:42:10 PM AEST
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"honesty doesn't so too good"
What up with that?
I know what you meant. You wrote too fast because you were happy and theres a new subject to write about.
Good write with exception to that one line I pointed out. |
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Re: writer's block
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 02:53:20 AM AEST
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Yep, sometimes when we're happy inside we are unable to write a powerful poem.
I find that myself too.
Great write. |
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Re: writer's block
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by EverlastingDawn on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 07:50:26 PM AEST
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A good change of pace from your depressed poetry. Great poem. The simplicity and happiness of it all just makes it refreshing. Good write.
~Dawn |
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