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Graveyard Vacancy On Isle 666
Contributed by
DemonProdigy
on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 05:11:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Dust is falling, collecting on a tombstone
An empty grave shadowed by memories
The culperate entity awakening me alone
I burned at the stake just so we could be
But you fed my flesh to the darkness
And stabbed my existence until it bled
Above me my sky was empty and starless
I began to anticipate and covet the dead
With all due respect, I hope you cry yourself off a bridge
A zombie child you so gladly will leave behind
I am the antagonizing feind of a *****
Leave it all up to me and I'll be sure to take your life
Let us trade souls as I devourer yours with this knife
Your hopes and dreams are irrelevancy
With an avenging joy youre ******* dead to me
Your grave is no longer vacant, I leave you with a smile
And think back on the good times as I laugh for a while
Copyright ©
DemonProdigy
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2005-09-04 17:11:36]
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Re: Graveyard Vacancy On Isle 666
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by Archie on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 05:32:05 PM AEST
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Not what i expected. I am disappointed that you did not edit your swear words. CHILDREN READ POETRY ON THIS SITE. if you are a premium member there is a special place where you can post poetry like this.
I can not give this poem a positive comment until the swear words are (*) out. sorry. |
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Re: Graveyard Vacancy On Isle 666
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by colinbaker62 on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 08:18:09 PM AEST
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I quite like this even though I have no particular background knowledge of the specific subject matter.
C'est bien je pense
Colin |
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Re: Graveyard Vacancy On Isle 666
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 09:04:37 PM AEST
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Wow very graphic and I don't understand why
people are getting on you about two swear
words they should look beyond that at the
amazingly disturbing poetry located in this
piece. Seriously I loved this and the imagery
and mood at the start was truly creepy and
frightening setting the stage for this
remarkable write. Hope to see more.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Graveyard Vacancy On Isle 666
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by freak98976 on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 02:59:10 PM AEST
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| Well, alike the other too, I enjoyed this one just as much. But I still do not realise why people are getting on you about this poetry. Yes I am a child, age 13, but no it does not effect me nor my parents. I think that it just shows how truely emotional you are. Who knows. I love your poetry and think you should continue writing it. So I am leaving you an extremely positive comment, your poetry is dark in a way and serious in another. Kudos again for a job well done. |
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