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All Because Of You.....
Contributed by
onangelswings
on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 01:10:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A waken by a touch
L ightly brushed my skin, with
L asting tingles it left
B ehind to taunt ones
E very need. Just to release
C ontained emotions, words softly spoken
A ttached by wants and needs
U nknown by what lies ahead.
S cared to look any farther,
E ntering forbidden doors, for it may
O pen up ones heart, to be
F airly shared by two, these
Y ears of Love and Laughter, will bring
O fferings of Happiness, waiting to be
U nfolded, a future of memories.
Copyright ©
onangelswings
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2005-09-04 13:10:19]
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Re: All Because Of You.....
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 01:31:39 PM AEST
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I really like the way this is done.
I find that with a lot of poems like this there is no real flow to the words. This one is an exception, it seems.
Well done, this is very good.
Phil xxx |
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Re: All Because Of You.....
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 10:32:49 AM AEST
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Intersting and original. You would think it limiting to have to use a particular letter at the begining of each line, yet you used them so flawlessly that had you not seperated them out I might not have even noticed!
A WELL DONE WRITE!!!!! |
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