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Your eyes
Contributed by
POOBEAR
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Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 12:53:56 PM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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You never see me.
Your glances always
rudely brush past me,
and find their way into the crowd.
It never seems to fail.
You are always able ,
to find that something better
that always comes along.
I don't have to see her.
I see your eyes.
Even though they look away from me,
I am the one they laugh at.
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POOBEAR
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Re: Your eyes
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by humphdj on
Friday, 12th July 2002 @ 09:13:16 AM AEST
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a very short relationship..........not short enough.
You express it well
Even though they look away from me,
I am the one they laugh at.
Nice lines
Rgds
Dave
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Re: Your eyes
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by Chrissie on
Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 02:42:47 AM AEST
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Very well expressed Lynn...excellent. I find this very poignant yet strong..
Love
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