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Moonlight serenade
Contributed by
trini
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Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 09:40:25 PM in AEST
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A dance in the flicker of moonlight
Gowns of auburn and gold
Sparkle as the heavens watch over
As the moonlight serenade begins
Cool winds brush against my face
Trees wave their forbidden branches
Brimming with the summers end
Chromatic leaves scattered on the ground
Loose myself in deep cobalt eyes
They seem to see inside me
Lost in the entrancing gaze
We dance till the mornings rays
Copyright ©
trini
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2005-09-03 21:40:25]
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Re: Moonlight serenade
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 09:59:37 PM AEST
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It's beautiful..
and may I say, that you could not
have chosen a better composer and
maestro..then Ludvig van Beethoven-
'tis true..
a most beautiful poem my friend-
Yours-
Billy |
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Re: Moonlight serenade
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 07:33:36 AM AEST
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| A really vivid write. Liked it a lot. Chris. |
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Re: Moonlight serenade
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by gary on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 08:59:34 PM AEST
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| This felt like one of the best poems that has hit me all week. |
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