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The Rain
Contributed by
trini
on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 08:27:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Woken by the storm
Street lights below are shadowed by the rain
Liquid vengeance on the people below
Rushing through the gutters to escape
A windowpane orchestra
Bathe in the sounds of the night
Drums of the clouds
Violins of the earth
Watch the sun streak the roads
Painting a red-orange lavish
A sight to replenish the soul
A new day has awakened.
Copyright ©
trini
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2005-09-03 20:27:03]
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Re: The Rain
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by Sweetheart on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 09:19:55 PM AEST
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| Very lovely write. I love the phrase "A window pane orchestra" that is very creative. I love all nature poems and this has been one of my favorites so far. Great job! Keep up the good work. |
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Re: The Rain
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by gary on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 08:56:32 PM AEST
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| I liked the rain I found some writers that I liked reading this week . Yours are great to me. |
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Re: The Rain
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 09:30:54 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful:)
hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: The Rain
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by candysears on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 09:12:07 PM AEST
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Very good write.
God Bless! |
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Re: The Rain
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by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 10:03:34 PM AEST
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| I like this, you used really great images to help create the scene. Very nice write. |
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